帮忙看一篇英语作文 不知道有没有语法错误的地方放帮忙修正

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帮忙看一篇英语作文 不知道有没有语法错误的地方放帮忙修正
Hello,I am Liu Wei.Now let me tell you something about my day.
I go to school from Monday to Friday.So I usually get up at 6:30 in the morning.I have breakfast at 6:45.Then I go to school at 7:00.Oh!It is 8:00.It is time to do morning exercises.“Class begins.” “Good morning,Mr.Guo!” Do you know what`s the time now,friends?Yes,It is 8:20!The first class begins.I often have lunch at 11:00.I go home at 5:40 in the afternoon.I usually have dinner at 6:00 in the evening.I do my homework at 7:00 in the evening.It is time to go to bed at 11:00.
This is my day.It is a funny day.How about yours,friends?

答案

It is time to go to bed at 11:00.
改成The time to go to bed is at 11:00
It is a funny day.
funny改成fun