帮忙看这段英语有没有语病

题目

帮忙看这段英语有没有语病
It’s my honor to be able to submit an application to your school.I apply for two reasons; first,as we all know,your school is a well internationalized famous university with good teachers and equipments and in a strategic location.The graduates are widely accepted and the employment prospects are good.Secondly,my parents and I are convinced that your school is a good choice and it is beneficial for my future development.
I think that the future society will be in need of actuaries and financial professionals,as I am also interested in this field,so I chose the BSC (AC) and the BAA / BAA (Acc & Fin) as my aspiration.
If I have the honor to be accepted,of course,the most important task for me is to study hard,and I will actively participate in various activities as well.
Upon the completion of undergraduate studies,I will continue to further study in order to respond to social needs better.

答案

第三行的是equipment不可数名词
第五行的词组不对be beneficial to
最后一句话contiune to do sth or contiune sth