这样的英语作文,10分能得几分

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这样的英语作文,10分能得几分
A Weekend to Remember
Last weekend, I went to San Francisco, CA with some of my friends. There we visited a big zoo. We saw a lot of animals there, such as American, African, Asian, European and so on, we had a good time there because we can only see Chinese in China and we saw many foreigner there. Then we visited a big museum, we saw many beautiful tourist guide, that was nice! In my province, most of the girls aren't very beautiful.
But there was also something scary. The policeman there was scared, we saw a heavy policeman with short black hair, he saw a drunk driver and then he shot him! That was cool but scary.
All in all, I had a nice but scary weekend.
第二段 The policeman there was scared
scared 改成 scary

答案

第一段,we saw a lot of animals there 后面举例是美国人,亚洲人,这样真的好吗?
如果字写得好看,排版漂亮的话,7分以上应该没问题.