写篇英语作文～80分

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写篇英语作文～80分
书面表达：假如你是李华,你在一份学生英文报看到一个热点话题,父母能否成为你的朋友,于是,你在同学中间做了一次调查,请根据以下内容给该报编辑写一封信,报道一下调查结果和谈谈你的看法 父母能否成为你的朋友：不能 占45%原因,父母太忙只关心我的学习成绩而不考虑我的精神需要 能 占55% 父母经常像朋友一直与我聊天 注意：文章要包括以上早点,适当发挥,不能逐条翻译 词数100词左右 信的开头已给,不计总词数 dear editor,i saw your hot topic about whether parents can be our good friends and i conducted a survey among my classmates
我已经问了一次了,

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dear editor,
i saw your hot topic about whether parents can be our good friends and i conducted a survey among my classmates.
After having recollected the questionaires from my classmates,
soon i had draw a conclusion primary which can be sorted into two parts of opinions . 45% of of the total people being questioned do not think they can be friends with their parents.The reason is their parents are often too occupied in their daily works to spend time in communicating with them . Their parents only focused on their performance in school rather than paying enough attentions to their inner thoughts. 55% of the people being questioned think their parents are really their good friends for they always talk with their children and are willing to listen to their ideas .
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yours sincerely