英语高手可以帮我看一篇文章有什么语法或词汇错误吗?还能添加点什么吗?

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英语高手可以帮我看一篇文章有什么语法或词汇错误吗?还能添加点什么吗?
When I recalled my summer life after College Entrance Examination,It was neither vivid nor extraordinary.But I just think it was simple but meaningful.
Mabey it was really dull for others to stay at home all day long .But for me ,I could do a lot of things about what I was interested .I read novel John-Chistophe and enjoy the deeply meaning of it.I liked to sit there just waiting for a moving movie at 22:00o^clock although I can do it by suffering the Internet .
To someone mabey tralling is enjoyable .To others ,they may have their own things to do .But I just like the feeling to stay with my parents and that is what I think the most imortant thing.

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