英文段落修改,另外一段话,高手帮忙修改一下（包括语法句式）,高分感谢,谢谢了

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英文段落修改,另外一段话,高手帮忙修改一下（包括语法句式）,高分感谢,谢谢了
The key to solve the contradiction between forage demand and support is finding a development path suited to China’s current condition for forage industry, specifically, we need to employ different forage industry development patterns based on regional advantages. Based on these analyses, this paper firstly estimates the grass support and demand in China’s pasturing areas, semi-pasturing areas and farming areas, then describes the existing forage production patterns and emphasizes several typical forage production patterns in Ningxia Autonomy Region, finally, gives some specific and targeted advices on forage industry development in different areas according to foreign and domestic advanced experiences. The suggestions focus on two aspects: on one hand, strengthen the natural grasslands’ protection and rational development, and increase the artificial grasslands’ planting area, so as to increase forage grass support, on the other hand, set sto

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哥们儿,写论文呢吧,鉴于你的这个摘要不是很难,我改了一下,修改内容见【】
主要内容说的是粮草供应?饲料供应?如果我理解错误可以进一步交流
The key to solve the contradiction between forage demand and support【supply and demand 供求】 is finding【finding 改成 to find】 a development path suited to China’s current condition for【for 改成 of】 forage industry,specifically,we need to employ【employ 改为 bring】 different forage industry development patterns based on regional advantages.Based on these analyses,this paper firstly estimates【去掉词尾s】 the grass support【support 改为supply】 and demand in China’s pasturing areas,semi-pasturing areas and farming areas,then【,改.then 改 Secondly】 describes【去掉词尾s】 the existing forage production patterns and emphasizes several typical forage production patterns in Ningxia Autonomy Region,finally【,改.finally改Finally】,gives【去掉词尾s】 some specific and targeted advices on forage industry development in different areas according to foreign and domestic advanced experiences.The suggestions focus on two aspects:on one hand,【on one hand,改为 one is to】strengthen the natural grasslands’ protection and rational development,and【建议将and改为as well as】 increase the artificial grasslands’ planting area,so as to increase forage grass support,on the other hand,【,on the other hand,改为.The other is to】 set stock numbers according to grassland carrying capacity,balance the forage grass demand and support【supply and demand 供求】,and achieve the comprehensive benefits of【of 改成 from】 grass planting and animal breeding.
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