请问两个英语句子有没有什么错误?

题目

请问两个英语句子有没有什么错误?
1,To master the topic is more difficult compared with other types of discourses,such as,the narrative discourse,expository discourse and so on.
2,From above,we can see the difference between appreciation and judgment lies in that appreciation is the assesment of things or things or process,while judgment is the evaluation of human and human behavior.

答案

1.第一句,很有歧义,个人认为插入句最好放在你要伴随的主语阿动词啊之类的最近的地方,这里是other types of discourses 和topic想比较不是 to master the topic这个动作根other types of discourses比较,我会改成comp...