英语翻译

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英语翻译
（中文是想要表达的意思,翻译不必和中文完全一样）
中文部分：
最近在我上发生了很多事情,很多我付出了很多心血和努力的事,最后却没有得到好的结果.这让我非常的失望甚至是有一点绝望.所以听了你的故事很有感触.我愿意相信一切都会好起来的,只是真的希望那一天早一点到来.同样,也希望你的生活一切顺利.
我的翻译：
Actually,there a lot of terrible things happen on me recently.A lot of things which I worked very hard on it but did not get a good result.This makes me not only sad but also despair.That's why I'm so touching when I hear your story.I try to believe everything will be fine and I truly hope it could come soon.I also hope everything on you is OK.

答案

错误太多了哦
actually换成recently,后面的recently删掉
there后面加have been
happen on换成happen to
下一句中的a lot of 冗余去掉
worked very hard on it把那个it删掉
a good result换成good results
This makes me not only sad but also despair.
改成This makes very disappointed even a little bit despair
touching换成touched,hear换成heard
I try to believe
改成I'd like to believe
hope后面改成that day could come sooner
最后一句改成same here,I wish everything‘s going on fine with you too