求将这篇英语作文改正在11点以前

题目

求将这篇英语作文改正在11点以前
MY MOTHER'S LOVE
On a cold day,I was angry with my mother .I didn't tell with her.I went to bed early .In next morning,I had a cold .But I didn't tell with my mother.My mother took care of me,when I had a high fever.

答案

on a cold day,i was angry with my mother.i didn't talk to her.i went to bed early.in next morning,i caught a cold.but i didn't tell my mother.my mother took care of me when i had a high fever.
这文章是原文吗?盖起来好奇怪.感觉语句不连贯,不过这样的应该是没有语法错误的
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