初中英语作文,帮忙看一下这篇文章的错误,

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初中英语作文,帮忙看一下这篇文章的错误,
My dog Lucky has been lost for two days.I have not found she yet.Where could she be?I think she might be sent to the police station.So I suggest to ask the police.But my little sister says she might be on the way home.She only wants to stay home and waits for Lucky come back.My parents are as anxious as me.They think she could be dead.We are fairly worried.I hope to know where she is as soon as possibie.

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I lost my dog Lucky two days ago.Unfortunetly,I still couldn't find her yet.Where was she going?Accroding to my suspicion,I considered that she might be sent to the local police station.Therefore,I decided to ask police and made sure that if they had any info about my dog Lucky.But my little sister suggested me that perhaps Lucky might be on her way home and tried to persuade me staying at home and waitting for Lucky until she coming back automatically.
In the meanwhile,my parents were worried Lucky as well because they both hold a pessimistic perspective with Lucky.
In a word,I really wanted to know where exactly Lucky is and,hopefully,she would come back soon.
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