请问我这句话有语法错误么?大家帮忙看看谢谢啦!

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请问我这句话有语法错误么?大家帮忙看看谢谢啦!
However, children who grow up with the time guided to have a health and perfect personality is not the sole reason for the destiny of society.
孩子们被教育成健康优秀的品质并不是决定社会命运的唯一原因
However, the way children who grow up with the time guided to have their own personality is not the sole reason for the destiny of society. 改成这样行么 教育孩子的方式并不是决定社会命运的唯一原因
或者把who grow up with the time 删了

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没看懂,你用翻译机翻译的么你翻译这个太复杂了我觉得可以说the quality of children nowadays,which included nice personality and healthy mental condition,is not the only factor to effect the destiny of the...