帮我看看这面这些话有没有什么错误

题目

帮我看看这面这些话有没有什么错误
I'm tried to forget this day because I realy don't like growing up.
The beforetime,I was always hoping my birthday,because of the birthday cake and the gifts.
I already 23 years old.I miss the past time so much.

答案

I tried to forget these days because i really hate growing up.I used to expect my birthday a lot because of birthday cake and gifts.Now,i am 23,and i miss the days gone by.
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