帮忙检查一下这篇英文读后感有没有错误（语法和单词运用）,

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帮忙检查一下这篇英文读后感有没有错误（语法和单词运用）,
Feel by heart
After reading the article called ‘A Gift’,I think the boy is pitiable.He had not seen his father since that graduation day just for a car,much less received his father’s gift in another way.His father loved him very much,but he didn’t treasure this love.So he didn’t thank his father in time,and there is no chance for his father to hear his thank and apology.
As many people said,‘Desires let people be not able to see the fact.’ The boy just wanted the car too much.This cause he can just see the real things he received before his eyes but can’t see things his father wanted to show him in fact behind of the gift.
When we were born,parents have been being concerned about us.Even if they can’t meet the goals we expect,they are going to try their best to make us happy.
As their children,we should understand our parents.They are so hard to raise us from we are young to we are grown-ups.There is a sentence I heard before ‘Something

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After reading the article called ‘A Gift’,I think the boy is pitiable.He had not seen his father since that graduation day just for a car,much less received his father’s gift in another way.His father loved him very much,but he didn’t treasure this love.So he didn’t thank his father in time,and there is no chance for his father to hear his thank and apology.非常地好,绝对的,我是一个高级点评师