麻烦帮忙改一篇英文短文,纠正里面的错误,越多越好.

题目

麻烦帮忙改一篇英文短文,纠正里面的错误,越多越好.
A foreign university exhibition fair held at Zhijiang Hotel on March 18.Over 50 universities from 10 countries open their doors to students who eager to go abroad to continuing their further study.More and more middle school students have joined in the tide of going abroad.The lower-aged group have become the new highlight of this tide.And whether early entry into international education means better education nor it pushes the young to leave their family too early to discipline himself is discussed a lot by both parents and educators.How do you think of this tide of going abroad?

答案

held前加上was

eager前加上are
continuing改为continue
joined后面的in去掉
group后面的have改为has
whether前面的And改为But
nor改为or
himself改为themselves
how改为what