谁帮我改改这段我写的英语作文呀!

题目

谁帮我改改这段我写的英语作文呀!
For example,I did not like history class when I was a junior school student.My historical teacher,however,once leaded us to visit a historical museum.I saw many ancient tools,building and works of art from the period of human evolution.These human long history and culture was deeply attracted me.Through this method,not only it increases my interest in history subject but also better make me understands the content of textbook.
有点幼稚.谁能帮我改改.有些句子能减缩就减缩.

答案

I am a student,but I don't like history.When we visit the museum,I saw many old tools,construction and artistic works.A long history culture deeply attracted me.This method makes me fall in love with history,know more about the content of the text
我是一个学生,但不喜欢历史课.当我们参观博物馆时,我会看见许多古老的工具、建筑和艺术作品.悠久的历史文化深深吸引了我.这个方法使我爱上了历史,更了解了课文内容