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zhang li is my best friend.she is very fat and strong.but she is very cute.she likes eat.after school you can see she is eating.well!she always help me when i have problems.and she make me happy when i sad.
we always go to shop at first on weekends,next we go to library.she very like books as well as eating.

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Zhang Li is my best friend.Though she is very fat and strong,she is also very cute.She likes to eat.Everyday after school you can always see her eating.Well,she always help me when i have problems and she would make me happy when i am sad.we go shopping at weekends and then we would go to the library.She lieks books just as eating.