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After the story”Under The Moon”
This is a Science fiction about the earth.
Kaih and rilla are leading actor.There are working in spaceship OM-45.One day,the satellite gave some diffenert number about the AOL.they found the AOL is breaking up.
The Earth ia at risk.so they want to see the commander of Earth and talk about this problem.
the Earth commander called Gog is the richest man on Earth and the worst man on Earth.Two years ago ,a man named Adai has found the hole in the AOL,and he told to the Gog because he wanted more money for the AOL.but Earth commander was very angil,he sent Adai to the colony under the Moon.why the earth commander did that,because he dosen’t like the earth,he want to live in Mars,he is making a spaceship for Mars.
On the way,kaih and rilla saw the commander of Australia,.he is a kind man,he love the earth—he want to protect this planet.so he want to help kaih and rilla.
When kaih and rilla saw the earth commander—Gog and aft

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