麻烦大家帮我改篇作文

题目

麻烦大家帮我改篇作文
Part A
Directions:You will have an English class next Friday,but you can't attend the class.Write an application for leave to your English teacher,Mr.Wang,telling him:
1) why you ask for leave,
2) what you will do to make up for it.
You should write about 100 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name.Use "Li Ming" instead.(10 points)
An application for absence
Dear Mr.Wang,
I am extremely embarrassed about that I can attend the English class next Friday.Because I have an interview for the volunteer of Olympic Game.As I really want to do something for 2008 Beijing Olympic Game.
I know that as a student,study is the main work of my daily life.So I will make sure to catch up my missed work from my classmates as soon as possible.Firstly,I will entrust my classmate with notes of the class .So that I wouldn’t miss the major points of the knowledge.And then I can learn the lesson by myself and finish the homework seriously.I t can check the result of my study.At last if I have any question I hope I can receive your help.
Thanks for understanding.
Yours student Li Ming
November 1st 2007

答案

embarrass是尴尬的意思,不怎么恰当．用sorrythat I can't attend你是无法去上课As改成because,2008前加theBut I will make sure to catch up with my classmates as soon as possible.receive改成get更得体Thanks fo...