修改成英文书面语,尽量挑错!（呵呵）

题目

修改成英文书面语,尽量挑错!（呵呵）
XXX market is located in the west of walking street,Nanjing road and X market which extends long along the street.XXX is next to X supermarket,The most influential large-scale consumption place in Shanghai which integrated money for expense and the leisure as a whole.
这个商场位于南京路步行街和X商场的西部,沿街面长．临近于X超市,上海最具影响力的金钱聚集消费,休闲一体化的大型消费场所．

答案

XXX market is located in the west of walking street,Nanjing road and X market which extends long along the street.XXX is next to X supermarket,The most influential large-scale consumption place in Shanghai which integrates buying power and the leisure consumption as a whole.
buying power [简明英汉词典]
购买力