这是我写的一篇英语小短文.希望有人能帮我看看有哪些错误的地方

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这是我写的一篇英语小短文.希望有人能帮我看看有哪些错误的地方
The safety of the school service is geting worse and worse.To protect student ,The school has taken some measures to it. When you come to classroom. You will find the chairs and the tables are clean .The teacher is also kind to everyone .What more,The school sometimes will be hold all kind of actives. That can make you school life interesting.

答案

the school 应该为 school 没有特指那一间学校
geting 拼写错误,可替换选项为：getting
语法兼逻辑错误,没有“为了保护学生,学校做了许多措施保护学生”
taken measures to do (to后不可加名词或代词)
To protect student ,The school has taken some measures to it.改为The school has taken some measures to protect student.
come to do 去做某事
When you come to classroom 意思应该是“当你走进教室”吧
则应改为When you come into classroom
what more改为what's more.
注意一下时态：sometimes will be 改为sometimes will is
hold all kind of actives
让学生们保持活力?hold all kinds being active
保持某些活动?hold all kinds of activities
you school life 改为 your school life
然后,整篇文章,中心是?
前面讲一下安全,后面讲到有趣的课堂老师是肿么了?