七年级英语短文,麻烦帮忙改改儿子写的,

题目

七年级英语短文,麻烦帮忙改改儿子写的,
根据下列表格提示,以“my Saturday”为题写一篇60词左右的英语短文.
时间 活动内容 7：00 起床 7：30 吃早饭 8：00~11：00 12：00 吃午饭 14：00~17：00 与朋友一起踢足球 18：00 吃晚饭 19：00~21：00 在家看电视 21：30 去睡觉
I usually get up at 7 o'clock on Saturday morning.In the morning,I usually eat breakfast at half past 7.Do my homework is from 8 o'clock to 11 o'clock.I usually 12 o'clock eat lunch.
Play football is from 14 o'clcok to 17 'clock with my friends.
I usually dinner at 18 o'clock.
watch television is from 19 o'clock to 21 o'clock.
I go to bed at half past 21.

答案

Do my homework is from 8 o'clock to 11 o'clock 本句严重语法错误,缺少主语.应改为 I do my homework from 8 o'clock to 11 o'clock .另外I usually have lunch at 12 o'clock .and play football from 14 o'clcok...