看一下这篇英语小短文有没有什么细节什么的错误

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看一下这篇英语小短文有没有什么细节什么的错误
I have two brothers ,they were very different,and they are not too friendly.Xiao Ming studies hard,always get good grades.But Xiao Hong only to eat ,sleep ,play of the game of interest.One day Xiao Ming was reading a book ,he drank too much water,so he wants to go to the toilet.Then Xiao Hong when using the toilet while he came suddenly open the book.As a result ,and they made up

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I have two brothers ,they were改为 are very different,and they are not 去掉too friendly.Xiao Ming studies hard,always get改为getting good grades.But Xiao Hong only 加wants to eat ,sleep ,play 去掉of the game of interest（interesting games更好）.One day Xiao Ming was reading a book ,加but he drank too much water,so he wants改为wanted to go to the toilet.Then Xiao Hong when改为was using the toilet while he came suddenly open the book.As a result ,and they made up最后一句不太理解想表达什么