哪位大侠能告诉我这篇雅思作文能的多少分!

题目

哪位大侠能告诉我这篇雅思作文能的多少分!
Some people think the government should pay for citizens’ health care and education while others argue that it is not the government’s responsibility.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
essay：
At present,whether government should respond for individual’s health welfare and education fees has been a topic of heated debate.
On one hand,supporters insist that government should dedicate itself to improving citizens’ living conditions,which include both health care and education.Firstly,neither health care nor education cannot be the cornerstones of social development.More specifically,both health care and education can influence an individual’s life substantially and immediately-that is,without a well-being of either health care or education,one can be impoverished or even hazardless to whole society.Further,of essential obligation is it for government to ensure citizens’ well-beings of both health care and education.As nation is made up of pr

答案

这篇作文按9分制,可以的6分,但美中不足是你不能很好的区分,美式英语与英式英语,在一篇文章中,尤其雅思考试,你最好只用一种,不要两种混来混去.