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Even though there are many reasons for using animals to find out a treatment for diabetes in human beings, many people argue that there is no problem with using animals to do experiment. Firstly, researchers found that " dogs show clinical signs of diabetes similar to humans and it is easy to find out the effective treatment in human and in the future that the device will become smaller and less invasive" (Adams, 2011, Para 8). There is no doubt that the treatment for diabetes was a big step for the researchers. "Affected animals are unable to utilize sugar in their bloodstream but they can give a hormone that helps cells turn sugar into energy."(Adams, 2011, Para 2). The most inspiring thing was that "the Veterinarians find that with this type of diabetes that is similarly to the way humans are treated who with insulin injections and a low-carbohydrate diet".(Adams, 2011, Para 2). Secondly, according to the article "Exercises Help People with Diabetes" the University of Missouri-Columbia do not find that: "lifestyle change can brings strong improvements but the study also found that women did not improve as much as men." (Jennifer, Faddis, 2007, Para 6). So it do not mean that if we do exercise, people can change or make some improvement in diabetes. Also, people do not agreed with the researchers' effectiveness about the background informations about the benefits. (Hareyan, 2008, Para 2.). All these difficulties make it difficult for researchers to find out a better way to cure diabetes.
However, even though there are several arguments these is no problem using animals for finding out how to treat diabetes, others still think that it is unnecessary to use animals. One of the basic problems was that they think that "dogs are not usually the same as human beings, and the most important thing was that people cannot predict what will carry for us in the future." (Adams, 2011, Para 6). If people use animals to treat diabetes, maybe in the future, people will have some other diseases that do not know before. As these things happen, people cannot find a better way to stop. The most important thing is that animals are also breathing everyday. They also need a better environment to live, so how can treat them in such a rude way? It is unfair to them and human beings are merciless. To be honest, people should treat them friendly, because it will help us to live better. Not only for this reason, if we use dogs, we should know one point that it is "if human beings do not use correctly, our complications can arise".(Adams, 2011, Para 6). Every coin has two sides, if we cannot control the treatment process correctly, people will kill the animals, at the same time, the researchers will have a bigger problem that they do not face before.

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Even though there are many reasons for using animals to find out varying treatments for diabetes in human beings,many people argue that there is no problem with using animals to conduct the experiments.First of all,researchers found that 'dogs show clinical signs of diabetes similar to humans and it is easy to find out the effective treatment in human and in the future that the device will become smaller and less invasive' (Adams,2011,Para 8).There is no doubt that the treatment for diabetes was a big step for the researchers.'Affected animals are unable to utilize sugar in their bloodstream but they can give a hormone that helps cells turn sugar into energy.'(Adams,2011,Para 2).The most inspiring thing was that 'the Veterinarians find that with this type of diabetes that is similarly to the way humans are treated who with insulin injections and a low-carbohydrate diet'.(Adams,2011,Para 2).Secondly,according to the article 'Exercises Help People with Diabetes' the University of Missouri-Columbia did not find that:'lifestyle change can brings strong improvements but the study also found that women did not improve as much as men.' (Jennifer,Faddis,2007,Para 6).So it does not mean that if we exercise,people can overcome or make some medical improvement in diabetes.Also,people do not agreed with the researchers' effectiveness about the background informations relating the benefits.(Hareyan,2008,Para 2.).All these difficulties make it demanding and laborious for the researchers to find out a better way to cure diabetes.
However,even though there are several arguments these is no problem using animals for finding out how to treat diabetes,others still think that it is unnecessary to use animals.One of the basic problems was that they think that 'dogs are not usually the same as human beings,and the most important thing was that people cannot predict what will carry for us in the future.' (Adams,2011,Para 6).If people use animals to treat diabetes,maybe in the future,people will have some other diseases that is not known to us now.p As these things happen,people cannot find a better way to stop.The most important thing is that animals are also breathing everyday.They also need a better environment to live,so how can treat them in such a brutal way?It is unfair to them that human beings are so merciless to them.To be honest,people should treat them kindly,because it will help us to live better,morality and conscience also come into play.Not only for this reason,if we use dogs,we should know that 'if human beings do not use correctly,our complications can arise".(Adams,2011,Para 6).Every coin has two sides,if we cannot control the treatment process correctly,the animals will die,and at the same time,the researchers will have a bigger problem that they dis not have before to face.
希望能帮你,专门用了复杂的单词:)我汉语虽然不怎么好,我擅长英语.现在住在英国^^ (7年)