请英文好的朋友帮助修改一下这篇英文报告.

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请英文好的朋友帮助修改一下这篇英文报告.
1.Introduction
In recent years there has been a growing concern for the environment and car manufacturing company have to take responsibility for the environment. This has led to considerable discussion on the life cycle of car manufacturing companies’ products.
1.1 Background
As the fast increase in the number of cars, causes massive release of carbon dioxides (CO2) that contribute to the serious problem of global warming. The car manufacturing companies has attracted attention and make some environment policy.
1.2 Purpose
This report will look at two famous car manufacturing companies and evaluate the environmental information provided on their websites.
1.3 Criteria
The criteria used in this report are based on those proposed by two famous factory, including Volvo and Toyota. These are:
How many information about Sustainability could find in their official website?
When were they pass the ISO14001?
When are their late

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x05Introduction
There has been a growing concern for the environment in recent years,and car manufacturing company have to take responsibility for the environment.This has led to a considerable discussion on the life cycle of car manufacturing companies’ products.

1.1 Background
The rapid increase in the amount of cars causes massive release of carbon dioxides (CO2) that contribute to the serious problem of global warming.The car manufacturing companies have attracted attention and some environment policy were made.

1.2 Purpose
This report will look at two famous car manufacturing companies and evaluate the environmental information provided on their websites.

1.3 Criteria
The criteria used in this report are based on those proposed by two famous factories,including Volvo and Toyota.
These are:
How much information about sustainability could be found in their official website?
When did they pass the ISO14001?
When was their latest GRI report?
What are the famous achievements of these companies? 


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