求高手给我修改一下考研英语面试的自我介绍~

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求高手给我修改一下考研英语面试的自我介绍~
Good morning,my dear teachers,my dear professors.I am very glad to be here for your interview.My name is ***,i am 23 years old .I come from baoding,a very beautiful aicent city.My undergratuade period will be accomplished in hebei medical university in July ,2009;and now,I am trying my best for obtaining a key to Beijing university of chinese medicine.
The reason that i choose to study chinese traditional medicine is very simple.i come from a long line of herbalist doctors.when i was a little girl,my parents send me to play the gymnastics.i do loved it.unfortunately,i was badly injured by the bad skill of the young coach,both my left leg and arm were paralysis.but maybe i am still a lucky dog,my father is a herbalist doctor,he used the acupuncture on me every day,and i even acupuncture all by myself.2 months later,i was feeling myself again.maybe i was destined to be a doctor.
Generally speaking ,I am a person with great perserverence.I am a hard working student especially do the thing I am interested in.I will try my best to finish it no matter how difficult it is.During the days preparing for the examination of postgraduates,I insist on get up before 8 oclock and go to bed until 12 oclock every day,no matter how sleepy I was.It was really a hard time .And just owning to this,I could be standing here now.
I always believe that one will easily lag behind unless he keeps on learning.Of course,if I am given a chance for advanced studies in this famous University,I will stare to effort to master a good command of advance my capability.
it is said that when you get up every morning,you have 2 choices:1,go on sleeping,go on dreaming,2,get up to pursue ur dream.i'll choose the latter.so please give me a chance to chase my dream!

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