请帮我检查这段英文有错误么.

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请帮我检查这段英文有错误么.
 Well,here are three main aspects that I will be talking about.Children need to understand their parents,Meet more friends and Extend some more hobbies,initially for the first point,most parents are very hard working,the reason why they doing it is they have a family especially for their children,parents expect their children to receive the best education and enjoy the better life,all of this is based on economy,therefore most parents don’t care wherever they are working at,they just care about how much they can earn for their children or family,so children should understand their parents,don’t be naughty and don’t be positive if your parents are not around you.Secondly,it is usually feel lonely if parents are not at home and little by little,it might cause some mental problems on children,so I prefer children to meet more friends,

答案

谓语动词不能做主语 more friends and some more hobbies···这里错误,在Meet和Extend后加上ing即可 此外还有挺多···基本上属于中国版的英文