自己写了一个英语句子,请高手帮忙看有什么语法错误没.

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自己写了一个英语句子,请高手帮忙看有什么语法错误没.
I am really disappointed as I had a friend but now we have not contact with each other.I fell she become a girl who is so snobbish.

答案

首先,as换成because,因为because表示原因的时候语气最强烈,原因最显而易见其次,we have not contact with each other改成we haven't been contacting with each other,因为就算你要用完成时也应该是contacted而不是...