英语翻译

题目

英语翻译
My new home
Hello!My name is Jenny.Today I live in a new house.My new house is very beautiful.There is a river in front of my house.The river is very clear.There are many many hills behind the house.And there are many trees near it .These trees are flourishing.You can see some birds are flying,some fish are swimming.
This is my new house.I like it very much.About you?

答案

建议把many many改成many,这句有语法错误.My new house is very beautiful这句建议把开头的My new house 改成it.You can see some birds are flying,some fish are swimming这句最好改成You can see some birds fly ...