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Hainan is a beautiful place,it is the second largest island.The water is clear and the sky is blue .All the year round,there are many coconut palm trees,and you can on the long beaches do some watersports.Hainan is a populer city ,I think you should visit to there .There are many ways of traveling such as by plane,by train,by car and people can choose any of ways of traveling if they like.you can go there by plane,because it’s very fast.
I hope you will have a good time in Hainan!

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Hainan is a beautiful place,it is the second largest island.[这句话两套主谓,少连词 改法1：将it改为which——定于从句.改法2：it前“,”改为“.”i大写]The water is clear and the sky is blue.All the year r...