看一下这个英语句子有没有毛病（我自己写的）

题目

看一下这个英语句子有没有毛病（我自己写的）
Welcome to Happy Street
Happy Street is very good place to have fun.It's a quiet
street.You can sing and dance in the beautiful park.Is it
there ,nexe to the a small post office.If you hungry,you
can eat some food in the park.Do you like this street?
Oh,if you buy some tings,you can go to a big supermarket.
It is betweenthe park and the bank.
就是句式有没有毛病 或者语法错误 小细节（如It is = It's)就不算了

答案

第二行 is 和very 中间加a 第三行改为You can sing and dance in the beautiful park which is next to a small post office.第四行 hungry 前加 are 倒数第二行 改为if you want to buy some tings...