帮忙改一篇初二英语作文

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帮忙改一篇初二英语作文
Hello.I am Tom.I think Wei Hua’s weekend is very busy but fun.Because he does lots of things and had fun with his friends.I also had a busy day last Sunday.At eight o’clock in the morning.I was getting up.Then I brushed my teeth and had breakfast.After that,I rode my bike to the park to do exercise with my friends.First of all,we
run for 15 minutes.And then we played basketball with my friends,too.I went
back at 12:00pm and I had lunch at home.I watched TV in the afternoon.I began to do my Homework at 7:00 pm.Went to bed at 9:30.It was a busy and tired day!

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Hello.I am Tom.I think Wei Hua’s weekend was very busy but fun because he did lots of things and had fun with his friends.I also had a busy day last Sunday.At eight o’clock in the morning,I got up.Then I brushed my teeth and had breakfast.After that,I rode my bike to the park to do exercises with my friends.Next,we
ran for 15 minutes.And then I played basketball with my friends.I went
home at 12:00pm and I had lunch at home.I watched TV in the afternoon.I began to do my Homework at 7:00 pm.I went to bed at 9:30.It was a busy and tired day!
语法错误很少,语句也很不错,表达完整,清晰,应该是一篇佳作.
仅稍作改.
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