我是自学英语的新手写了一篇的自我介绍,请高手们帮忙看下有没有时态标点符号等方面的错误,谢谢!内容如下:

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我是自学英语的新手写了一篇的自我介绍,请高手们帮忙看下有没有时态标点符号等方面的错误,谢谢!内容如下:
Hello,everyone.
My name is miki 23 years old,I work in a logistics company.I like music and English.
There are seven people in my fanily,My farther and my brother work in a factory.My mother and sister in law are housewife.The youngest in My family is sister in law stomach with a small baby.
In my spare time.I like to read book.I think reading could enlarge my knowledge.In addition to reading I also like sport like run and swimming.
My favorite is English because I think it is interesting to say one thing via different sounds. At present , My English is very bad I wish my English could be improve in the next two years and speak fuent English in future.
Relating to English listening to English songs.watching English TV.programg. I want to makefriend with study English friend and foreinger . I think when I walk along with two others . they may serve me as my teachers.

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Hello,everyone!My name is Miki.I am 23 years old.I work in a logistics company.I like music and English.There are seven people in my family.My farther and my brother work in a factory.My mother and my...