这篇文章有没有语法错误 (文中是过去时态）

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这篇文章有没有语法错误 (文中是过去时态）
yestoday,i went to mr.chen's home.had english class ,but i was late ,because i eat lunch with my father .when i arrived here ,a sister had come ,her mother was saying something to mr.chen ,so i played with mengmeng ,after a while ,the aunt went out ,we had study!

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嗯.问题有点多.主要是中式英语,都是直译.had english class 改为 had an English class;eat lunch 改为 had lunch;sister是指自己的亲生姐妹,可以改为 a girl; had come 改为 came in.最好重新翻译一遍,改得更地道一...