英文好的进来看一下,

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英文好的进来看一下,
Why is it imortpant to learn English for your future career
I'll be graduating from high school,right now,I am facing to walk out my first step toward the future career.Obviously,English plays an important role as a popular language in the word.Especially,nowadays,China is confronted with unprecedented rapid dexelopment in China.Thus,English becomes most important communication tool.Therefore,to master English may increase my competitiveness in job hunting process in the near future.
As I known,the effective menthod to learn a language is to live that country.After careful consideration,Idecided to study abroad ,and I put the United Dtates of America ad my destination for it’a cademic,cultures,and so on.I definitely believe that no matter which field I’ll ioin in the future,the overseas study experiences would benefit me a lot in my future career.

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……Why it is important for our future to learing English well.(你下面写的是自己,上面不能用第二人称,谓语从句运用不正确)I m going to graduate from high school（没有正在毕业一说= =）.So here will be a g...