特急!请帮我改改下面的英语短文,特别注意语法,

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特急!请帮我改改下面的英语短文,特别注意语法,
英语很差,请不要见笑!
My new on Chinglish
Hi,everyguys.This is my pleasure to have a talk here.
Had you ever heard of some Strange phrase such as ‘long time no see' or ‘good good study,day day up'?OK,Their name is ‘Chinglish’.Chinglish is Chinese and English's combination.That is to say,a sentence with Chinese grammar and English words.
At frist,Chinglish was treated as a foolish thing,people who says Chinglish would be laugh.But,what about foreigner's opinion?To my surprised,most of the foreigner ain't refuse Chinglish.In there mind,Chinglish is funny and worth encouraging.So do i.I think that Chinglish will be developed quickly.As a matter of facr,i do hope more and more people can accept this amazing thing.But need to notice is ,we still should use official English in our daily life befor Chinglish became a formal language.
That's the end of my speaking,thanks again for your listening.

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这个 是演讲稿吧……
首先你这个标题我没看懂来着……
My Opinion On "Chinglish"
Hello everyone.It's my honor to do this speech.
Have you ever heard of any phrases such as"long time no see"or"good good study,day day up"?These phrases that sound like Chinese are named"Chinglish"."Chinglish" is the combination of Chinese and English.
Nowdays,Chinglish has become more and more popular.Sometimes,people who speak Chinglish may be laugh at,especially in English classes.How ever, to my suprise,most of the foreigners are not semmed to sitick up to Chinglish.Some of them even think it interesting to speak Chinglish.as a matter of fact,Chinglish is used more and more frequntly.
As far as I am concerned,I don't think speaking Chinglish is stupid.In the mordern world,we should learn to accept new things like Chinglish moderately.
That's all,thanks for your listening.
我所能做的就是写成这样了,我是个高中生 英语还算是不错的 .看了你这篇文章以后呢 我想说几点建议 言语可能有些不恰当 请见谅
首先 楼主你的英语就有些Chinglish 虽然我的也是 但是你的程度更深一些 英语的语法和中文的语法还是有不小的差异的 要多加注意啊 还有一些时态之类的地方一定要小心 反复斟酌,有时正是这样的小地方一分两分的把作文分压低了.
在考试中 首字母大写也是很重要的.
看这篇文章 似乎能感到你在有意识的想要使用一些学过的比较高级的短语词汇,但是要注意的是 使用不太恰当 这样反而会加重扣分,对付这种事就要夯实基础知识了
在作文中使用被动语态或复合句 从句等复杂的句式都可以提升作文的水准.
对于单词的拼写……估计是打错了吧
这篇作文我不能说我写的很好 但是应该没有很重大的错误.
还有很重要的一点 写作文要符合实际一些 不要扯太远
有些程度比较重的词 口语化的词 或者听起来不太文雅的（比如说人胖虽好不要用fat而用heavy之类的）尽量不要使用.
……废话好多 见谅 见谅