帮我看看这篇简介有没有错误或者改进的地方
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帮我看看这篇简介有没有错误或者改进的地方
Self Introduction
Good morning teachers.It is really a great honor to have this opportunity for this interview.First let me introduce myself.My name is Fang Lurongzi,and my English name is Amy.I graduated from the No.4 Middle School this summer.
I am very optimistic,outgoing and active.And I think my best characteristic is that I’m very indenpent.Because my parents decided to start their own business when I was in grade three,they sent me to a host family.And I had to take care of myself when I was very young.But I adapted to the new life very quickly.Then I became more and more indenpent.So I think I can look after myself well if I go to study in your school.
In my spare time,I have broad interests like many other teenagers.I like reading books,listening to music,playing the erhu and I love computer programming,too.My favorite subjects are math and English.Because I think that studying math can improve my ways of thinking and English can make me go
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for this interview不用要就可以independent拼错了 拼成indenpent了when I was very young用的不好 你现在也是young啊 说when I was 8/9 (你三年级多大就多大了)会好一点if I go to study in your school感觉有点...
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