帮忙修改一篇英文作文,貌似语法问题很多啊……

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帮忙修改一篇英文作文,貌似语法问题很多啊……
If I Were An AlienIf I were an alien who lived on the earth,but missed her home very much.I tried to find the way to go back,but I losed over and over again.Maybe some day,I would meet an alien boy who were the same as me.And he said to me "Come with me,girl!" He would hold my hand and I would board his silver rocket ship.Blast off to the stars,just we two.We would whiz pass the planets,pass the Milkey Way.Oh,look at that star ruled by apes!I would bake an apple cake while he was driving us through some scray asteroid that could crash us into pieces.We would land on the Mars when he kissed my alien lips.Through hardship,we would finally get to home.Viva la the Great United Mars!

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If I Were An AlienIf I were an alien living on the Earth,and I missed my home very much,I would try to find a way home .I tried many times but failed .One day,I would have met an alien boy who were th...