马上英语面试了哟 大家帮忙看看我的介绍有没有错误

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马上英语面试了哟 大家帮忙看看我的介绍有没有错误
帮我检查一下有没有错误了~Hello,everyone!.It’s my great honor to standing here and introduce myself to you.My name is Candice.My Chinese name is Ma Xiaohan.I’m 15.I am very glad to join you in this class.I just graduated from No.3 Middle school of Ganzhou.I like Canada very much,so if I could study in Canada one day,I would be very happy.In the three years of past,I was a good monitor.Because I am a confident cheerful and humorous girl.But my English is not very good now.So I'd like to improve my English in this class.And very glad to see our teacher.Thank you.

答案

1.standing-->stand and并列两个相同成分 ,要和后面introduce保持一致
2.im 15---> im 15 years old 要么就im a 15-year-old girl,或者im at the age of 15
3.just graduated--->have just graduated 用完成强调
4.if i could study---->ii i can study if引导时间状语从句要推时态
5.In the three years of past----->in the past three years 更地道
6.But my English is not very good now.So I'd like to improve my English in this class.And very glad to see our teacher.——————>However,my english is not good enough,i hope that in the future,we can make progress in English together.Thank you.
后面有点乱了.从想去加拿大学习,到当班长,到英语不好.这之间的关系很乱,可以调整.