帮忙修改一下英文语法错误～这是有关简历的,

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帮忙修改一下英文语法错误～这是有关简历的,
My name is Nina,and I was born in December,1989,in Hsinchu.When I was fifteen,our family moved to Beijing,where my dad work.Because of this is a new environment for us,we had a hard time to adjust it at the beginning.Everything was new for me.My parents choose to sent us to study at the international school in Beijing.My experience make me not afraid to communicate with people from all over the world.I believe that honesty is the most important thing in one's personality.
After graduating from high school,I was studied in Beijing Language and Culture University.English is my major and I choose Japanese as my second foreign language to study.Since I have been to Beijing for many years,both simplified Chinese characters and traditional Chinese character I can write or type fluently.I'm interested in Music,so I learned Chinese vertical bamboo flute in other university.I also can play piano,too.Although I don't have a chance to practice it frequently now,I still not forget the skill of it.
I have been an active member in my class.I take part in our activities such as performance,the survey of questionnaire.I also be a member of DIY club in other university.Last year I worked at Fubon Financial,and I learned the basis of insurance and the basic sales skill.
I am proud of what I have accomplished thus far in my life and see much of it as a stepping stone toward a successful future in the career life.If hired,I will bring with me my enthusiasm and dedication,and contribute with my expanded skill sets.

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My name is Nina, and I was born in December, 1989, in Hsinchu. When I was fifteen, my family moved to Beijing, where my dad work. Because of the new environment for us, we had a hard time to adpat at...