求高手帮忙看这篇托福独立写作能得几分.

题目

求高手帮忙看这篇托福独立写作能得几分.
题目是选a broad university education 还是a specialized university education
Since I am studying in a university with a broad education and I benefit from learning about many different subjects, I am for a broad university education.
In today’s society, nobody can truly achieve success with just one skill or one specific field of knowledge. The development of the society is in need of as many as versatile people. University students, as the great builders of the future society that is fully progressed, should develop in all dimensions. While a broad university education can help broaden the students’ horizons and lay the foundation for them to get all-round development.
One may also find that there are an increasing number of interdisciplinary courses in the university study. With overlapping of different but relevant disciplines, a student is unlikely to confine himself inside a specific field. The advent of more interdisciplinary courses is also an indica

答案

3分的样子,有些小语法错误,字数少了点.段与段之间逻辑关系不清晰.