可不可以帮我再看一下这段语法!

题目

可不可以帮我再看一下这段语法!
Recently,more and more people perfer to be a vegetarian and avoid the fat food for some reasons.Apparently not.Fat is essential for every cell in the body.Vitamins A,D and E,which are responsible for healthy eyesight,bone strength,mental health,cancer and blood vessel protection and,therefore,heart health.We need to eat real fat in order for these vital vitamins to be absorbed into the body.

答案

第一句话中perfer应该是prefer吧~
另外,Vitamins A,D and E,which are responsible for healthy eyesight,bone strength,mental health,cancer and blood vessel protection and,therefore,heart health.这句话没必要用定语从句,因为主句没谓语.建议改为：Vitamins A,D and E are responsible for healthy eyesight,bone strength,mental health,cancer and blood vessel protection and heart health.或者增加主句的谓语.