英语作文,求大神帮我改改

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英语作文,求大神帮我改改
Nowadays,we often see many immoral behavior in public.for example ,throw rubbish around,pit on the floor,eat food in the bus.once i was in the library,i have done my math work,suddenly someone's phone rang ,it broke my thought i feel very angry
Many immoral behavior have bad influence,they can make people don't trust others and make many clash.and if happened in other country ,it could our country become unpopularity.and if child learn it ,child will go ill in thought.
So we should change it ,we should teach child what thing is right.And we can punish some immoral behavior.And we can speech about this teach don't do that.

答案

Nowadays,there are many Uncivilized behaviors in public.
once i was doing my math work in the library,suddenly someone's phone rang ,it broke my thought which i feel very angry at.
As we know,these bad behaviors usually lead to negative influence,they may make people don't have enough confidence in him or her and cause many clash.and if it happened in other countries ,will make our country unpopular.and that will have bad affect on children if they learn it.
So we have the duty to forbid it,and tell kids which is right and what is allowed to do.What's more,the government should punish these people whose behaviors are unallowed.And we can give a speech about it to educate people.