The middle autumn day is an important festival in China.It’s very interesting and special.It’s in Au
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The middle autumn day is an important festival in China.It’s very interesting and special.It’s in Augest and September.It’s on Augest 15th in lunar calendar.On that day,everyone in the family will help to make the house clean and beautiful.Families are together.We have a big,special dinner.We say happy the middle autumn day for all the good things we have.We can eat lots of mooncake.We can see the round moon,and we can see the program.We have a very funny day.
It is said that there was a dragon in the sky.The dragon wanted to swallow up the moon.To protect the fright the dragon away.
I like the middle autumn day!
答案
The Mid-Autumn Festival is an important festival in China. It’s very interesting and special. It is said that there was a dragon in the sky. The dragon wanted to swallow up the moon. To fright the dragon away and protect the moon, we have the Mid-Autumn Festival. It is held during Augest and September, on Augest 15th in lunar calendar. On that day, everyone in the family helps to clean the house and make it beautiful. Families meet each other and have a big, special dinner. We say "happy Mid-Autumn Festival" to all the good things we have. We can see the round moon, eat lots of mooncake and we can watch special TV shows for Mid-Autumn Festival. It is a very funny day.
I like the Mid-Autumn Festival!
只是修改了语意不同的地方和小细节,整体语法很好哦
几个注意一下的小地方:
英语里所有标点符号结束都要空一格
所有节日开头字母大写
一般情况下时态都要一致
太多it's开头了,老师会看腻的
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