一个初一英语作文题

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一个初一英语作文题
My summer vacation
I have a very interesting summer vacation this year.I spent my summer vacation with my family.
We went to park.It's so beautiful and green.There were many trees and flowers.There people were very finendiy.People were singing and dancing in the park.some were taking photos.Others were playing games.We had great fun playing in the park.
Next,we went shopping.the supermarket was too cranded.but the goods were great and cheap.so we bought some goods.we felt pretty happy.
This is my summer vacation,a joyful and short vacation.I like it very much.
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I 【have 过去式,had】 a very interesting summer vacation this year.I spent my summer vacation with my family.We went to【加：the】 park.【It's so beautiful and green.这句翻译出来好像有点问题,建议删去...