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请老师帮忙点评一下这篇作文
I like to think about "life in the future".
The environment will be much worse than it is now.I believe the tree will be less. There will be more and more people in the world,but the animals will be less. And I think there will be more buildings and more cars in any countries. The most important thing is there will be more wars,more people die in the wars. Huamn even will can't bresth or sleep.
Ihope we protect the earth.

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我喜欢去思考“生活在未来”.环境会比现在更糟.我相信这棵树将会减少.将会有越来越多的人在世界上,但是这些动物将更少.而且我认为会有更多的建筑和汽车在任何国家.最重要的是将会有更多的战争,更多的人死于战争.Huam...