请英文高手帮我看看下面的英文有哪些语法错误,

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请英文高手帮我看看下面的英文有哪些语法错误,
Thank you so much for your reply and your advice.I've thought your suggestion very deeply.I accept the truth is that I must face the problems will be probably happened in the future study.If I can not solve the Englidh problem,How could be challenge lots of professional difficulties.I should not give myself excuse that I didn't get well English scores just because there were some accidents happened during the test.But what I want to say,I really felt my English is much more better than before since I found which part is most deficiency of my English.I keep studying everyday.If your school haven't make final decision,should I have chance to be conditional accepted?Take school English class,study hard.Things would be changed.No one knows how much powerful of human potential and It's difficult to say where will be going in the next few months.

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真的,语法错误不是一点点,你应该好好补补了.最关键的是一个句子只有一个谓语你知道吗?I accept the truth is that I must face the problems will be probably happened in the future study.I really felt my English is much more better than before.句子而且都很生硬,完全是汉语式英语.
给你改一下：
Thank you so much for your reply and advice.I've thought over your suggestions very carefully.I accept the truth that I must face the problems which will probably happen in the future study.If I cannot solve the English difficulty,how could I face the challenges of professional problems.I should not excuse that I did not get good scores just because of some accidents happening during the test.However,I want to say,I feel my English is better than before after when I found the most deficient part of my English.From then on I kept studying everyday.Could I have the chance to be conditionally accepted if you have not made the final decision?The situation would be changed if I take English class and study hard day after day.No one knows how powerful the human potetial is and it is difficult to say what will happen in the next few months.
好好对比一下,这样没有语法错误了,但是句子还有些生硬,没有办法,我是一句句按你的句子修改的.