帮我看一下这篇文章有没有一些语法错误,指出并改正

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帮我看一下这篇文章有没有一些语法错误,指出并改正
Everyone has his own dream.Everyone's dreams are not the same.I also have myself dream.
I have a dream.I hope to have a farm.So,I hard for my dream.
I have a dream.I hope to have a farm.On the farm,there is a big house and a limpid river ,and some fruit trees .
On my farm:In spring,the trees give welcome shade ;In summer,fragrant flowers is very beautiful ;In autumn,the fruit trees is very fruitful ;In winter, the whole farm is snow gleams white.
I love my dream.I love the world in my dream.
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everyone has his own dream.Everyone's dream is different.I also have my own dream.
I have a dream.I hope to have a farm.So i work hard for my dream.
I have a dream.I hope to have a farm.On the farm,there is a big house and a limpid river,and some fruit trees.
On my farm:during spring,the tress give welcome shades; in summer,fragrant flowers are very beautiful; over autumn,there are fruits all over the tress; and finally in winter,the while farm that is covered by snow,gleams white.
I love my drea,.I love the world in my dream.