修改作文,不只是修改语法错误

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修改作文,不只是修改语法错误
My name is Xiaoyue Liu.I graduated from N Junior High school .I miss that place very much.However,I am looking forward more to the 3 wonderful years that we are going to spend at W High School.In my opinion,I’m a very lucky girl,for the good friends and my dear relatives keep me as company all the time.When I meet with troubles ,they will give me hands and always on my side.Because of them,I become more extroverted.I have many hobbies.I love playing the flute and listening to music.I like painting and reading books on psycholigy.I want to be a painter when I grow up.I want to use my brush to spread happiness to many more people.

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帮你改了下,因为事实不了解,所以内容上还是只能在你的基础上改,你自己对照一下,我肯定不会写一些“chinglish”的句子的,绝对地道的,相信您识货!My name is Xiaoyue Liu. I graduated from N Junior High School. Tho...