请问这篇高三英语短文大概能得几分?

题目

请问这篇高三英语短文大概能得几分?
假设你是新华中学的学生李华,你和在上海上学的英国朋友Tom约好下周末去北京旅游,但你因故不能赴约.请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件：1.表示歉意； 2.3.另约时间.注意：1.词数120~150； 2.可适当增加细节
tom,i'm sorry that i won't go to beijing with you.
it is supposed that i go to beijing with you,but i have some troubles to handle in my work,and it is difficult to settle.now,the only one way i can settle these troubles is that i must handle it step by step,so it will be a long time before i finish it in my work.i'm so upset now.
i have a new plan about the tour ,i wish that you would go to beijing together with me on the next sunday,then i will be free,will you be free then?if you won't be free,you could choose** the time that you fit with
大小写因为抄的急没打出来,

答案

这篇文章吧,我就给11分.
首先,大小写部分,人名,地名要大写知道的吧?
第二,打字的时候也要知道标点符号的吧.英语里没有“.”只有“.”.
第三,前言不搭后语,写的很乱.
第四,最后一句,你想表达的是啥玩意?
第五,高三学生了只写简单句是没有亮点的.
好了,优点,至少题目给出的要求内容,你还写到了.